a serialized online story
by Tommy Schmitz
Chapter 27 - What in the hell is going on here?
(Here is the link to Chapter 26.)
Katie and Susan O'Brien walked with their coach
and walked with confusion
from Gotokuji Station on the old Setagaya Line,
to where their coached had a home-stay arrangement
just three stations north of the gym.
An elderly couple welcomed them at the door,
a quiet, calm, half-smiling
man and woman in their late 70s
who offered Katie and Susan and their coach
the same tender presence and unconditional acceptance
they clearly had for each other.
They asked the three girls to be seated and
without query or comment
began bringing in steaming big bowls
of homemade soup and tempura and noodles
and salmon and rice and fresh ikura and pickles from Kyoto.
Katie and Susan and their coach hadn't noticed
until this moment how hungry they were.
And with bowing heads to the old couple,
and with gochisousamadeshita's of real gratitude
coming from all three,
they ate and enjoyed without speaking another word.
After dinner the girls cleared the table
and began the washing up,
and insisted the old couple sit down
and enjoy cups of hot green tea.
But the woman left the room and shortly returned
to pull Katie and Susan by the hands
to a huge hot bath she had awaiting them.
And now the girls sat tiredly and alone
on futons in candle light in a bedroom on the second floor
and pulled goose-down blankets over their shoulders and arms
and over their blue flannel jammies,
and exhaled glowing motions of condensation
through their teeth that chattered
on this unseasonably cold night
for Tokyo in spring.
"Are we nervous, Katie, or are we cold? said Susan.
"Too much of both, I think, right now." Katie said.
Today, the girls reflected,
was at once, the best of days,
and one of the worst as well.
"Welcome to our new life, Katie."
"What?" Katie said.
"Everything's the same
and everything is different.
And nothing of either
feels real any more." said Susan.
"It's like somebody just comes along
without our permission
and dumps a new batch of flavor and ingredients
into stew pots we've been tending to
each and every day of our lives."
"No fair." said Susan.
"And there is no removing
this stupid new flavor." Katie said.
"There is one thing we can do." Susan said.
"What's that?" said Katie.
"We can do well on Wednesday, at the national trials." Susan said.
"Yep, you know it. I really want to do well.
And maybe more so right now
with all this crap going on." Katie said.
"Yeah, me too. I want it even more right now." said Susan.
"Even if it doesn't make us feel any better." she added.
"Yeah. I never thought of that." said Katie.
"Just don't anybody talk to me
about Tuesday night in Kashmir." Susan said.
"Right."
I can't make myself... even imagine
thinking about that." said Susan.
"Hmmm. Yeah." Katie said.
"But I do wonder," Susan paused
and added with a tiny sneer of a smile,
"what our father would have to say
about all this?"
Katie recognized her cue
and sneared the smile back,
then coughed a moment to clear her voice box,
and sat up straight and pulled her chin down
close to her chest,
and in mock formality,
and low pitched voice
Katie put forth loudly, and in perfect English
her father's favorite phrase,
now famous and spoken with ease
among neighbors and local merchants,
among the milk and mail carriers,
and even more among their Tokyo middle school piers:
"what in the hell is going on here?"
"Oh!" Katie muffled her hand across her mouth, still talking:
"I said that too loud." The girls busted out laughing.
"Wait a sec, Katie. You hear that?" said Susan.
"What."
"There's someone at the window!" Susan said.
"It's Satchitananda-san!" Katie said.
"Wait! Shhh" said Susan. "There's someone also knocking
on our door."
"Yes, is that you, Sensei?" Katie said.
"Yes." the coach responded.
"Um, we're meditating, Sensei?
Could you please give us about ten more minutes?
"We're what?" whispered Susan.
"Shhh."
"Ten minutes, girls. Then we need to talk."
"Okay, Sensei!" Katie said, and motioned her head to Susan
in the direction of the window. "Let's get him inside."
(End of Chapter 27 - What the hell is going on here.)
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Sunday, April 22, 2007
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